I'm writing a story, is this a good example of an character with claustrophobia? What can i do to improve it?

Ravens share their subconscious with Noahs Ark. Crows are better. The Ark was Yaweh's until The Shark got it. Larma is the accumulation of magical energy accrued by the causal effect of life interracting on the environment. The paranormal is fuelled by injustice, good is better than bad. This is the end of times, decadence and promiscuity is rife. The West is being financed by the East to spread...