Frida Deprey
Wednesday, August 10, 2011
Do these sentences make sense? They're for GCSE essay.?
I think they're all absolutely fine, excpet maybe in the third one, remove the words 'amounts of'. Apart from that, it's really good. Ask another teacher for opinions.
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